Matt Bellamy

Hey Amy! I quite liked this because it could be interpreted in different ways, and different readers can apply it to different situations and possiby relate to it, which is ...

I really like this. I don't know the story it's based on, but right from the start, I was pulled in. The first couple of lines were so simple yet ...

This is very interesting. I wasn't sure at first what you were trying to achieve with the italics, but I guess, someone is speaking. I was also unsure about the ...

This is a good start. I think it sounds a little abstract at the moment, and could perhaps do with being more specific - what, exactly, in terms of money, ...

Hello! I really like this, and I especially like the ending. I was a bit confused though, I thought the title was "art" because that's what's at the top, but ...

Hi! I liek your poem but I think it's a little vague. And it's good to leave your poem open to interpretation so that the reader can assume whatever they ...

Hello! I think the concept of this poem is something a lot of people will be able to relate to. However, I'm not sure I'm keen on the narrator talking ...

At first I thought this poem was about giving up and losing hope, but as it continued I thought it was more abou having hope despite things going wrong, because ...

Hello! This is quite interesting, and it's open to interpretation, which I like. The use of wonder sounds a bit repetitive in the first stanza and I don't like the ...

Hello! I think the rhyming you have used gets very repetitive in this poem, and then it comes as a bit of a shock for the reader when the final ...

This is beautiful, I love your imagery just as it is - you describe things very well. I like how you describe the wind, and the sky "pricked" with silver ...

This flows really well and I like the description you used, especially "sharp-edged and glittering". You need a question mark at the end of the second stanza, though. I like ...

I like how short this is, because you managed to still make it powerful. You kind of mixed two metaphors towards the end though - perhaps the wind could be ...

You describe the water very well here, and I would liek to think that this poem could be a metaphor for something deeper. I ahve no idea what this line ...

I really, really like this. You describe loads of different things without making it seem cluttered, and I love the message that it sends about all the different beauty of ...